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Pelican Book Group Staff Blog: Thursday's Tips: Key Elements of Point of View

Pelican Book Group Staff Blog: Thursday's Tips: Key Elements of Point of View

If you struggle with POV, this article will be a great asset. The author goes into great detail with easy understanding on how to write correct POV, and also helpful is her explanations of how NOT to write POV.

Go ahead and check it out. I promise you will love this little gem:)


  1. That is a great POV article, thanks for sharing.

    I also wanted to thank you for stopping by my interview yesterday. You wrote that you are in search of a critique partner. A great community of pbs writers on facebook is the 12 x 12 in 2012. You may have luck there! Good luck to you!


    1. You're welcome, Jennifer! I really enjoyed your interview:)

  2. Hi from the Buccaneer Blogfest! I'm Laura from Thanks for your comment on my bookshelf earlier this week.

    I would agree with your POV on POV. What's up with authors skipping around to all the different characters' thoughts on every little thing? I find that very frustrating, as a reader, especially when it doesn't seem to be done for any particular reason. I just read a book where every member of a dysfunctional family had their say, one chapter at a time. Maddening! I much prefer books that pick one view and stick with it, as "conventional" as that may seem. ;)


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