Hey beautiful guys and dolls! Here it is! My CP feedback edited story. Had a hard time with this, but I hope it makes sense. I've got a post I'm working on I plan to put up after Thanksgiving. Here ya go. Enjoy... Every morning I wake to carnival day. Today, though, I have my key. If I don’t use it before midnight, my way of escape will gone. It’s a silver key with a twisted metal handle, a sapphire stone half moon and engraved stars. There’s a tiny inscription on the moon, but it’s so small, I’ve never been able to read it.I’ve always kept mine in my jewelry box, but today, I string it on a ribbon and tie it around my neck. My two best friends will be wearing theirs, too, and I wonder how they will escape this carnival of dreams. “What’s it for?” Cress asks as we stand in line for the swings. I run my fingertips over the entire silver surface. “I don’t know. It belonged to my grandmother,” I say. “Whatever.” She shrugs her shoulder in a dismissive way. “Have
Maybe you need to put a link in the above post - it was hard for me to find your entry, and judging by the lack of comments others might be having the same problem. :)ReplyDelete
I like the sound of this story, a historical Fantasy with a great premise. Good luck!
Thank you Stacy! I put a link up there:)Delete
I think this also go skipped because it shows it was posted after the deadline:ReplyDelete
Posted by Ink in the Book at 4:02 PM
(the 'webcam video' message on the vlog also shows it was recorded after the time posts were due :-( )
Love historical fantasy, interesting concept. Even if this doesn't work out KEEP PITCHING!!
I sent an email to Brenda explaining why my video was late and asked if i could post it later. I had a close friend pass away the night before and I was on the phone with family and friends all morning...Delete
Condolences to you and your loved ones, I'm so sorry to hear of your loss.Delete
With all that, it's amazingly dedicated that you even managed to pull things together to make this. I'm rooting for you!
I'm sorry about your situation, my prayers are with you and your friends. I came by several times in the morning and didn't see this. I just read my contest email - I rarely go on it when I'm not expecting entries there. Keep your video up, there have been agents stalking the blogs viewing them since yesterday. Some are not on the agent list. Also, get your pitch ready for Trick and Treat with Agents starting Oct. 24.ReplyDelete
I loved your pitch! I could use 100 years of beauty rest myself :) Great last line.ReplyDelete
Oh, and sorry it took so long for me to comment on this~ the volume on my computer stinks, so I had to wait for a time when I could find a quiet spot to listen.
Thank you Jess! Sorry about the volume problem. I know mine wasn't very audible.Delete