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A Surprise Is Coming!!!!!!

Oh! Let me just say, it involves.........

AGENTS! Agents who want you to pitch to them!

It involves a.........

3 month long FREE Workshop!!!!

Anyone interested in details?????

Look for them Thursday:)

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  1. UnknownOctober 22, 2012 at 10:16 PM

    That sounds awesome!! Look forward to reading about it.

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  2. KatrinaOctober 22, 2012 at 10:16 PM

    I am interested. Extremely interested! Can't wait. :-)

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  3. Yolanda RenéeOctober 22, 2012 at 10:42 PM

    Love surprises of this kind!

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  4. prerna pickettOctober 22, 2012 at 11:24 PM

    most definitely interested.

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  5. Sharon BaylissOctober 22, 2012 at 11:50 PM

    Sounds awesome!

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  6. T.J.October 22, 2012 at 11:52 PM

    You've been taking lessons from Sharon on the torture thing, haven't you?? I shall return...

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  7. L.P. HernandezOctober 23, 2012 at 6:53 AM

    I'll pay you all the money I have in my left pocket if you tell me now!

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  8. EllaOctober 23, 2012 at 10:02 AM

    Wow, so pretty over here! Thank you for your wonderful comments! I enjoyed all of your virtual gifts ;D
    I'm better-thank you~

    oooh, this sounds amazing! A perfect trick or treat...
    You have leaves falling...love it!
    so happy over here, I will visit soon! I love your site-
    @>-------

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