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And the winners are...!!!!!

#3 Sorry’s Not Enough

#7 Speck Hawkins      

#8 Race To butch Cassidy’s Gold  

Congratulations to all the winners! Yay! 

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  1. It's a big, huge, happiness smile for everyone!!!!!:):):):):):):):):):):):)

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  2. Congratulations you wonderful writers!
    I'll be looking out for your books on the Shelves!!!! WooHoo.

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  3. Thanks for hosting--it's been fun!

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    1. Thanks for participating! I hope you enjoyed the journey:)

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    1. Thank you, you wonderful judge:)
      I appreciate your time and expertise:)

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  5. I'm very excited to be moving on, and congrats to the rest of the winners in all categories (including you!) :-)

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    1. Woo-hoo! I'm so excited for you! I'm wishing you the best of wishes next week:)

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  6. Yay! So excited! :D Good luck to all of you, those who made it through and those who just barely missed it (came down to a close race, there!). :)

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  7. Thank you so much for stopping by my blog and taking the time to comment on my query.

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