Patience, persistence and perspiration make an unbeatable combination for success... Napoleon Hill
Hey beautiful guys and dolls! Here it is! My CP feedback edited story. Had a hard time with this, but I hope it makes sense. I've got a post I'm working on I plan to put up after Thanksgiving. Here ya go. Enjoy... Every morning I wake to carnival day. Today, though, I have my key. If I don’t use it before midnight, my way of escape will gone. It’s a silver key with a twisted metal handle, a sapphire stone half moon and engraved stars. There’s a tiny inscription on the moon, but it’s so small, I’ve never been able to read it.I’ve always kept mine in my jewelry box, but today, I string it on a ribbon and tie it around my neck. My two best friends will be wearing theirs, too, and I wonder how they will escape this carnival of dreams. “What’s it for?” Cress asks as we stand in line for the swings. I run my fingertips over the entire silver surface. “I don’t know. It belonged to my grandmother,” I say. “Whatever.” She shrugs her shoulder in a dismissive way. “Have
Can't succeed if we quit!
ReplyDeleteSo true. "If at first you don't succeed, try, try again."
DeleteNothing better than an inspirational quote - not sure about the perspiration though! xx
ReplyDeleteI know. Who begs for perspiration? come to think of it, who begs for patience? Although patience is a virtue!
DeleteI need to print this out and glue it to my screen! Thanks!
ReplyDelete~Debbie
That's why I posted it right at the top of my blog, so I could read it ALL DAY LONG:)
DeleteLove the triple Ps! That last one reminds me that I need to exercise more :)
ReplyDeleteHa! Exercise? Is that some sort of foreign word for write???
DeleteQuotes are my favorite motivation boosters. Thank you for this :) And it's crucial in writing!
ReplyDeleteYou're welcome! Thanks for stopping by my blog!
DeleteAmen to that. And I like the new look.
ReplyDeleteThanks! Who knows? Next time you stop by, it may be different again!
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