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Do You Hear Something?

How do you engage audio learners in your story? Many readers are visual people. They like to see things, and thus enjoy reading. (Which, by the way, I am a visual!) Audio people enjoy books on tape, music, and all things connected to the ears!

In order to draw your reader into the world you created on the written page, it is most imperative you entice them with their senses. Engagement of your readers happens with sound words. This is otherwise none as onomatopoeia: words that sound like are written. Please include words with flavor, resonance, texture, aromas, and pictures in the mind. Your readers will come back again and again when they know they can step into your world and feel as though they are actually living in the pages of your book.

Call out to your readers in a way they can relate!

Here is a wonderful list of sound words for inspiration:

clink, clang, clatter
boom, burst, explode
crunch, crackle, crinkle
gurgle, garbled, groan
murmur, cooed, whispered
plunk, splash, dripped
sizzle, splatter, splat
rumble, rick-a-shay, echoed
rattle, bang, creaked
whiz, whee!, whoa
thud, ker-plunk, drizzle
zing, zip, zoomed

Do you struggle with sound words? Or do you have some favorite sound words you'd like to share?

Comments

  1. Yolanda RenéeOctober 10, 2012 at 8:54 AM

    You amaze me, you write blogs full of helpful hints, work on a query for the haunted writing clinic, and hop around to other blogs giving helpful advice--how?

    Thank you, by the way, for the chocolate last night and the suggestions this morning. But I won't give up -- even though like GUTGAA my genre isn't in the running.

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    1. Ink in the BookOctober 10, 2012 at 1:24 PM

      You make me blush, Yolanda. Thank you for your kind words!

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  2. RachelOctober 10, 2012 at 9:14 AM

    I agree with Yolanda. Your blog posts are amazing, Ink! They're so helpful and sometimes funny. How do you do it? What is your secret? ;)

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    1. Ink in the BookOctober 10, 2012 at 1:25 PM

      Ah, gee! *kicks foot across the ground while blushing with a sway, sway*

      Thanks Rachel. You're too kind!

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  3. AnonymousOctober 10, 2012 at 10:30 AM

    Good aspect of writing to think about-- not only for the audio-attuned, but to help make descriptions richer and more impactful.

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    1. Ink in the BookOctober 10, 2012 at 1:26 PM

      You're right Julie! Descriptive words just make for better writing:)

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  4. UnknownOctober 10, 2012 at 1:08 PM

    You're so right.

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  5. Tara TylerOctober 10, 2012 at 1:23 PM

    i love, kathunk, kathunk, sound words!!

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    1. Ink in the BookOctober 10, 2012 at 1:27 PM

      I know. Me too! This makes me want to go write. Oh wait. That's what I've been doing all day. I needed a bloggy break, to say thanks to my lovely followers and faithful readers!

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  6. Suzanne FurnessOctober 10, 2012 at 1:24 PM

    Great point, I think I do put my readers senses to use but this is something to definitely consider when editing. Thanks.

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    1. Ink in the BookOctober 10, 2012 at 1:29 PM

      Hi Suzanne! Sometimes it's hard for me to remember not everyone is like me. I'm visual, but many are auditory or "feelers" so it's important to include everyone in your writing.

      Wait. Did that even make sense??

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  7. UnknownOctober 10, 2012 at 2:44 PM

    That is a wonderful list! I know I've used a few of those words, but probably not enough. On the other hand, we probably don't want to go overboard!

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    1. Ink in the BookOctober 10, 2012 at 3:35 PM

      It was just a little inspiration. Trying to help out with all the senses in my writing!

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  8. Kelley LynnOctober 10, 2012 at 9:07 PM

    Great post. I find the hardest sense to include is smell. And its one of the most important in my life so I try super hard to get it in my work.

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    1. Ink in the BookOctober 10, 2012 at 11:39 PM

      Awww, the old sniffer! Come back for my next post. I'm talking about the sense of smell:)

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