Thank you, Falling For Fiction and Jenny, for ALL your help. I am forever grateful:)
Here is my new query letter for Soul Driver. I have went through many revisions, and a couple of new titles. AND I'm still working on it, as far as revisions (based on feedback from my bloggers), but I thought I would get some opinions from everyone before I start the query process. Again, thanks!
River Morgan is petite, pink-haired and not quiet seventeen, but she already knows how to erase a memory. When she changes a memory, she writes it down in a Memory Book to keep the memories from becoming her own. Endless possibilities hover around this little-known power, and every Thief Taker in the town of Ravyn wants that power. When the book is stolen, River is no longer able to tell the difference between her memories and memories she’s wiped away. Unless she finds the book, her identity will be lost forever.
When River meets Ashton Drake, he presents himself as her Knight in Shining Armor, but what River doesn’t know is his armor is rusted. He’s searching for the Memory Book, too, but for all the wrong reasons. Or so River thinks. He’s secretly on a mission to return the Book to its rightful owner before devastating consequences destroy everyone whose memories are written within the Book’s pages.
As the odds turn against her, River is dead set on protecting the powers of the Memory Book. The time comes when she must risk her life by connecting with underground forces, playing fire with a power strong enough to steal her heart and a friend who thinks she’s better off dead. River must choose between doing what is right and doing what her heart wants.
Because some memories you want to live over and over again.
And some memories are best forgotten.