I know. It sounds like... well it's not! It's all about first lines of your manuscripts and WIP. And it's a contest from over at Falling For Fiction, one of my new favorite places to hang out!
What you do is post the first line of a chapter, or many chapters, from your current story and theres's going to be about 10 winners who will receive a critique. And let me tell you! These ladies do amazing critiques! So without any more nonsense, here's my first lines from my current WIP (Really, I have about 5 WIP, but this is my most recent!)
Chapter one: Forget who I am for just one minute and put your feet in my shoes.
Chapter two: Don't get me wrong, 'cause Star is a great friend but not so much a leader.
Chapter three: In all reality, this place is not totally bad with a capital B.
Chapter four: Without warning the chair flew out from under him.
Chapter five: The dock smelled of stinky fish and the conversation buzzed around the latest invention: the telegraph.
Well that's my current WIP!! Thanks for reading my great hookers.
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