tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5261136679185070760.post3736562453783562472..comments2023-10-20T04:44:55.665-05:00Comments on Ink in the Book: Wednesday's WIP: Fanfiction & Showing, Not TellingInk in the Bookhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03117718811407968345noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5261136679185070760.post-26272131511857571032013-03-17T22:39:57.190-05:002013-03-17T22:39:57.190-05:00I understand busy! Sometimes I feel like a puppy c...I understand busy! Sometimes I feel like a puppy chasing her tail. :(<br /><br />I'm just sorry no one got a chance to get Carrie's critique. She's wonderful, plus she was so gracious to accept when I asked.Ink in the Bookhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03117718811407968345noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5261136679185070760.post-8029084651902344682013-03-17T06:10:04.947-05:002013-03-17T06:10:04.947-05:00Oh darn it! I was hit hard with some projects and ...Oh darn it! I was hit hard with some projects and COMPLETELY forgot. Can you forgive me Talynn?!?! *hanging head in shame*T.J.https://www.blogger.com/profile/11719361269817168474noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5261136679185070760.post-58349428050348512842013-03-13T13:23:33.076-05:002013-03-13T13:23:33.076-05:00I love examples too. Some of my best improvements ...I love examples too. Some of my best improvements have been because I saw an example of what I was doing wrong:)Ink in the Bookhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03117718811407968345noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5261136679185070760.post-12148886962789225232013-03-13T13:22:46.815-05:002013-03-13T13:22:46.815-05:00Jess did a fab job, didn't she!Jess did a fab job, didn't she!Ink in the Bookhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03117718811407968345noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5261136679185070760.post-36082720543410288032013-03-13T13:22:25.807-05:002013-03-13T13:22:25.807-05:00Yep! This is not a contest for submissions. Just h...Yep! This is not a contest for submissions. Just help with show vs. telling and a one page critique from Carrie:)Ink in the Bookhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03117718811407968345noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5261136679185070760.post-31550743748809657992013-03-13T13:20:53.555-05:002013-03-13T13:20:53.555-05:00I used to do fanfic before. Not much though :( And...I used to do fanfic before. Not much though :( And are unfinished MSs eligible for the critique? This is the first time I've heard of it and I want in! :D Thnk you!SC Authorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10382410035007943921noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5261136679185070760.post-84799929549288227022013-03-13T09:46:58.277-05:002013-03-13T09:46:58.277-05:00I try to remember this in the original draft, but ...I try to remember this in the original draft, but usually have to hit it hard in edits. Even then, it's hard. I think the only way to get it is to practice and read example after example after example. Thanks for the help :)Tonja Dreckerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07683717853264134466noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5261136679185070760.post-68579847750042258652013-03-13T07:32:26.388-05:002013-03-13T07:32:26.388-05:00I think this is a weak area for me when I try to f...I think this is a weak area for me when I try to foray into fiction, so I appreciate all examples-- thanks for sharing!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00741349796538313075noreply@blogger.com